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Ethrock Gamer

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Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 11:14 am Post subject: Ethrock's Lyrics |
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Pyth told me to post this XD and I'm not sure if this would be the correct area to put it, so if it isn't, I'm terribly sorry to everyone. Anywho it's a song that I wrote >.> so I didn't put it under music since I'm no famous artist :p
Death Now << Just so you know this name may be temporary and the song is still a WIP I think, although when I put the tune out it lasts nearly four minutes
Here I am
Lost again, now
And here you come again, now
Come to find me once more
But it just won't work
No not this time
I'm to far lost
So far gone
I'm past the line
In my mind
And now I feel
Nothing at all
I'm not here
I'm really gone
Though you can see me still
I'm not here
You've lost me now
I'm drowning here
In your sea of love
And burning here
In my fires of hate
I just can't take
This mistake I've made
Chorus
Chorus
So just let me go
You can't hold me no more
So Just let me fall
Before I kill us all
Let me go now,
Think I've lost it
And you were just a part
This game is ending
Yea it's ending
And my life, it's pending
On change, And I think
It just might end
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rsstites HoG Staff/Admin


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Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 1:03 pm Post subject: |
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| It's good. Do you have an audio file of how it sounds and maybe how the music sounds? |
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FFfanaticx Hero of Gaming


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Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 1:08 pm Post subject: |
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| it sounds cool what sort of backing usic will you be using rock type stuff? |
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Holymonkey Moderator


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Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 1:19 pm Post subject: |
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| I like it. What genre is it? |
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FFfanaticx Hero of Gaming


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Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 1:22 pm Post subject: |
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hey that was my question
*mutters 'stupid copying monkey'*
jks |
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Holymonkey Moderator


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Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 1:23 pm Post subject: |
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But I used th posh word so  |
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FFfanaticx Hero of Gaming


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Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 1:27 pm Post subject: |
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| screw you jks you knew what i meant you and your bloody posh words |
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Ethrock Gamer

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Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 1:42 pm Post subject: |
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Well since you seem so interested as to ahve nearly started up a cannablistic feeding frenzy here, It's Alt-rock. if anybody has ever heard Carnival of Rust by poets of the fall... or a more popular example.... would possibly be You and Me by Lighthouse, about somewhat to that tune. and there is a dang good reason I haven't sung this or played it out.
1. I can't sing. you'd all die.
2. I'm still learning to play guitar and nod very good at it, maybe some other time. I have more if you guys are interested. |
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Pyth Superhero


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Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 1:43 pm Post subject: |
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| I vouch for point number 1. Seriously. XD |
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FFfanaticx Hero of Gaming


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Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 2:00 pm Post subject: |
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| ok i'll take your word for it hehe, yeah lets see a few more |
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Ethrock Gamer

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Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 5:26 pm Post subject: |
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Alrighty I got one more worth posting, so here it is;
Falling Apart
Slow tempo, slacked
I'm lyin' here
I'm cryin' here
I'm dyin' here, today
Fast tempo, increased tension
'Cause you're not here with me
Kiss my lips
Hold my hand
Look into my eyes
And you will
Understand
chorus
Chorus
-And now I am-
I'm falling apart
With my broken heart
And these words now dead
Keep ringin' through my head.
I dunno what to do
All I'd really wanted was
To be with you
End Chorus
I am, all alone
With me to talk to,
And you to think about
Now I really don't think
I can take this much more
chorus
You just can't see,
what is becoming me
And this, suffering
It just won't quit
This pain inside to real
I wanna wake up now
And see this is just a dream
chorus
Slower tempo, slacked
But now I can see
This was not meant to be
So I'm falling apart,
Just my broken heart.
No love on which to stand,
I think this is the end, for me
but before I go, I just want to say
chorus x2
To be with you,
Oh to be with, you
--this one would sound like, if anybody has heard umm... what'd be a good one, I think Roses by Poets of the Fall. |
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rickjames Moderator/HoG Freelance

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Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 8:44 pm Post subject: |
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Hold an audition, make a band, perform the song, put it on HoG, become famous.
My guide on how to become famous in 4 easy steps. |
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danny12 Site Admin


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Posted: Sat Aug 19, 2006 5:20 am Post subject: |
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| HOG can be your fan base |
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FFfanaticx Hero of Gaming


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Posted: Sat Aug 19, 2006 6:15 am Post subject: |
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| i'm liking it it is cool well worth organising a band for even if its just a group of talented mates it would be good |
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Posted: Sat Aug 19, 2006 6:32 am Post subject: |
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| I didnt once see an "eh?" in there, are you sure you weren't somehow switched at birth with an american child??? |
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